I'm at the 2013 GLPS camp, on writing class I made a 30- day challenges.
First we watched a short video about a guy name Matt Cutts who work at google company.
Matt Cutts was a normal busy guy who love candy, coke, TV, and footballs.
one day Matt thought his life were so boring and normal, so he think he should change something to be better person for 30 day.
so here we go!
habits to add: read every day. sleep at least 7 hour every day, prey every day
habits to subtract: no crying, no Korean!
I want to read books every day because I love books but, I don't have a lot of time to read so at glps camp in 1st study prioed I want to read at least 20 min.also I want to sleep at least 7 hours a day because I become really tired when I woke up every day then I can't concentrate at class time(I uaslly sleep around 5 hours).I am a christian. but I don't think I prey every day so that's why I want to prey every day...
two habits that I want to subtract is no speaking Korean and no crying.I cry a lot with no reason so I try not to cry but I miss my family and friends...
second I really want to get a green cards so, I will try to speak english every day!
FINAL ESSAY ASSIGNMENT
12년 전
FIX:
답글삭제line 1: camp, on -> camp. On
line 1: challenges -> challenge
line 2: work -> worked
line 2: capitalize "Google Company"
line 3: love -> loved
line 3: footballs -> football
line 4: capitalize "One"
line 4: were -> was
line 4: think -> thought
line 5: insert "a" after "be"
line 5: day -> days
Again, paragraphs.
You shouldn't list your 30 day challenge. You should write them in sentences and in paragraphs, too.
You'd become a very nice child if you keep your 30 day challenge. Now, you just need to write them into sentences.