Hello! my name is Christina (Ye-eun). I'm turning 13 this year.
I use to live in united state so, I love American foods better than Korean foods.
I have lot of American friends but, not that many Korean friends.
I'm sassy as a good ways.(I love being sassy)
I love ONE DIRECTION *_*
My dream is deployment
I love my life!
ps. please write comment on what you think about me!
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12년 전
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line 2: united state so, I -> The United States, so I
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line 3: friends but, -> friends, but
line 4: as a good ways -> in a good way
line 5: Isn't it diplomat? Not deployment?
OK. You have to write in paragraphs. Also, you have to place a comma BEFORE words like "but" or "so" not AFTER them.
How can you be sassy in a positive way? Interesting. I also believe that heading in ONE DIRECTION is very good. I hope you do that for your dream (I don't know what you mean by "deployment") too. Nice to meet you!:)
I think it's deplomat and I love One Direction too <3
답글삭제Yeah. One direction is good song. class 14 :)
답글삭제haha by the way one direction is not a song it's britsh boy band!
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