2013년 1월 13일 일요일

children should learn form abult

Hello everyone! I'm Christina. At writing class we watched a short video about girl name Adora Svitak.
Adora Svitak argued ,adult should learn from childern. I think she is wrong because a lot of time children make a mistake and sometime childern are being roud to their teachers,parent,and their gaurdian.
Sometime adults can be rood,childish or they can make mistake no problem!but, that dosn't mean that child adult should learn form children.To prove that I'm right I'm going to explane  2 reason.first of all, adult are charge of us!that why they go to work,earn money and they feed you wit foods, cloth, entertiment.
second, we are too young to feed our parents because we don't have that much knownlage and right to be come our parent's gaurdain.

It hard to gaurd our parent and teach them.
my last opioion is that we are not adults yet so we need to learn and prepare more to become better person and we are not smarter than our parents.
so this is why I think children should form form adult.
 thank you


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  1. Please be careful and check your writing for small, simple errors (typing mistakes, spelling, and grammar). These mistakes are easy to find and fix and make your writing so much better to read.

    For example: "roud"/"rood" should be: "rude".

    As for your content, I think that Miss Svitak was really saying that adults should take the opportunity to listen to and learn from children the things that children are good at (not the things that adults are good at).

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